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Name change?[]

The E for All demo (and the JumpFesta and Whobby demos, if I'm not mistaken) refer to this stage as simply Halberd instead of Battleship Halberd. Usually I would say "Dojo is always right" but there seems to be some contradiction there as well. If you go to the "First songs in My Music" update, and look at the list of starting stages, it's just listed as Halberd, and not Battleship Halberd. Just thought I'd bring this up incase anyone wants to be a daredevil and move the page. Thou Hath No Honor 20:20, February 27, 2008 (EST)

Edit: Since the game is now released in English, it is easily observable that the stage is indeed just Halberd. I'm going to move the page if no one minds. Thou Hath No Honor 03:55, 10 March 2008 (UTC)

Isn't this a bad line?[]

It's interesting to note that this is one of the only locations in The Subspace Emissary that is also a playable stage in multiplayer mode.

Unless there are more locations that also have this you can't say "one of the", plus it contradicts "only" because that's like saying you take 1/1 part of something. And what this line is trying to say is that this is the only location in the SSE that is also a playable stage, right? so wouldn't a better line be:

It's interesting to note that this is the only location in The Subspace Emissary that is also a playable stage in multiplayer mode.

Or if it isn't the only one:

It's interesting to note that this is one of the few locations in The Subspace Emissary that is also a playable stage in multiplayer mode.

Also, why not put all this in a seperate Trivia section with bullets. This way you can avoid the repeated "It's worth noting that...", "It's also interesting to note...". Just make it statements, facts, like this:
This is the only location in The Subspace Emissary that is also a playable stage in multiplayer mode.
82.93.9.196 16:34, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
Done but next time you can edit it yourself, that's why anyone can edit around here just in case we miss something dealing with our loving vandal friends or arguing about tiers. Carbonkirby (talk) 16:39, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
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