Thread:DerpyDoodle/@comment-6684591-20151128201313/@comment-6684591-20151228022919

Okay, that sounds good.

I have started to replace some of the 'you' with the character's name, though I have come across one or two instances where I replaced it with 'the player' instead because it simply fit into the context better; just thought I'd let you know so that you can take a look over it.