Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-29715216-20160623233226/@comment-31406004-20160701203517

Steel fortress

Gargan: W-We can talk about this. I didn't mean to hurt you all! I was just trying to develop plot, like you wanted Coach!

CoachSDot: The only thing you "developed" was excruciating injuries for all of us.

Gargan suddenly disappears in a puff of black smoke. Wario, Donkey Kong, and countless noobs fall off as a result.

Wario: AH! What the heck?

Olimar: He just, vanished! He's still alive but he's gone.

Weed #78,780: Uhhh, guys. Look up.

Everyone looks up, to discover the rift

Wii Fit Trainer: Didn't we close that thing?

CoachSDot: What's that?

???: It's the rift

The newcomer reveals himself to be Link

CoachSDot: Link? Didnt you like, go join PixelFox?

Link: ''Yes. But I was brought here on short notice by Rose, who gave me to ability to transmit my thoughts and will into the mind's of others''

Tempo: Telepathy

Link: ''No matter. That thing was created by TWON, and he's going to enter this realm in his purest form to destroy it!''

Rose: Oh you mean the dude who tasked us to prevent destruction of the realm from a vicious chain reaction triggered by greed? He's not a threa-

Rose is suddenly grabbed by a rift tentacle

I AM NO PLANT EATER, BUT THIS WILL DO...

Rose: Did that thing just talk?

Link: ''Yes, the rift has a mind of it's own. It usually tries to grab victims and eat them. But since it enters TWON realm, whoever enters will likely be at his mercy''

CoachSDot: Ok you were right. Would you help us save Rose?

The rift tentacle grabbing Rose is (temporarily) stopped by a long rope of weeds.

I AM NO VEGETARIAN, BUT FOOD IS FOOD...

The rift grabs CoachSDot with another tentacle

CoachSDot: Let go of me you disgusting thing!

Wario: We need to save them!

'TOO LATE. THEY ARE WITHIN MY GRAVITATIONAL PULL. THEY ARE MINE NOW!'

The rift sucks Coach, Rose, and countless weeds closer to it's mouth, as they simply accept their fates

CoachSDot: So this is how it ends? Being coddled by hentai tentacles dragged into a portal mouth.

Rose: Well it's been a good run. Rather be strangled by Super Brainz than this though.

(Downward)

Tempo: We can still get up there and pull them down!

Link: No. It's too late.

Link opens a portal with the power of polot development (JK he used a gun)

Link: Quick, everyone through!

Link and co. rush through the portal to escape the rift, as it swallows Coach and Rose. To where they end up? Wait and see...

Minutes after the next post

3 black beings exit the rift

???: '''Ugh. It's been a long time. Trapped in the black realm for ages, but I am finally free...'''

This one looks like a warrior with a black and blue pallete, and a cape. He has a gold eye, and as he spoke the impenetrable Steel Fortress fell apart.

Just like Pao-Kai described in FTS4

???#2: '''We are yours to command TWON. Where will we wreak destruction?'''

This one looks like CoachSDot in his prime form, but very yellow and menacing, sporadically switching to scarier forms.

???#3: '''I say we go straight to the heroes and kill them. They wouldn't stand a chance!'''

This one like a black Rose with a skull cape and a red aura.

???#4: '''No. That would kill all of the fun. I suggest we show our endless power in one encounter, then kidnap one of them. Then we hold them as hostage to get the heroes to do what we say...'''

And this one... like an old foe from FTS1 if you catch my drift (Wink Wink Nudge Nudge)

???: '''Go and find the souls. Kill them all. Even if I can easily do so myself, they seemed to have concured my only weakness. Show no mercy...'''

As he spoke, all of the trees shoke and collapsed, as a crater formed on the ground.

Everyone: Yes master

The villainous bunch spread out.

???: (Time to make a base of operations...) RISE!

As he spoke, a black and red castle rose from the ground as the sky became dark. With a moat of lava and many skulls. The forest turned into a menacing biome of skulls, lava, and death.

???: Good...

The evildoer entered the castle and sat on his throne as the rift roared, consuming more and more, growing stronger.